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What I never said aloud. by ~honeymfr:iconhoneymfr:



You're a mystery novel
Habitual
Deceiving
Youthful and quick
Running yourself in circles
Too focused on the details
Unable to patch them together
And develop a lens through which you can see me.

You're a clown
A heart behind a mask
Jolly yet lonely
A performer
An actor
Playing for a selective audience
Who laugh and giggle
But they don't see you struggle like I do.

You're a gypsy,
Unconventional
Passionate
Playful and jaded
Searching for another winding road
For strange and wondorous places
That you'll write books about when you're old
And I'll miss you.

You're hamlet
A poet
A genius
A lover
A pursuer
Once a mixed up boy
Now a man misunderstood
And I've loved you.
©2007-2009 ~honeymfr
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any idea's for a title?

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but after all this,
I've left you alone
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"Holden Caulfield." This sounds like it's describing him. I love it.

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well, I like how you wrote it and the motives. It seems to me very real and true, so I mind you described him perfectly respecting his character. Similarly, you use the structure you dont follow strictly. That's a big plus because a reader can see it form various views, but it have to be balanced .

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The only matter I miss is a person whom I want to write a letter. (Sandor Marai)

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